I hate, crying in silence
And being lonely with people’s presence
I hate standing in darkness
And waiting for happiness
I hate not having a friend
And always coming second
I hate trying to be the best
And always thinking of what should be next
I hate having to choose between two
And making a decision too
I hate the promises made to be broken
And the secrets that can never be spoken
I hate changing to someone I don’t know
And people telling me what to do
I hate the words I can’t say
And when I have to walk away
'I hate the promises made to be broken/ And the secrets that can never be spoken/ I hate changing to someone I don’t know' These lines are my favorite another trip to my list. I think I will be reading more of your poems.
Oh dear..hate..here I think is just a word to show the the things that doesn't make you happy..I enjoyed quite a few of your poems and I can see(I think,) that deep inside your heart hate doesn't really have a place.Hate..nothing but a word.. All these sorrows..they help you make such beautiful poems! ! Sometimes its good to be unhappy or lonely..gives you space and reason to write.. I bet you wouldn't be here if you were part of the ''contended'' ones..So dear (such a beautiful name! !) Wispering Rose: Go on! ! Write whatever gets into your mind, heart or soul and share with us! Hopefully, there will always be some souls to see a mirror or relate somehow to you.. Thank you
@ least i share somethings with u, the things u hate i hate too. well put.
it's really a nice one to read as it beautifully depicts how you feel.. but look at those lines, there's so much there to hate..and in real also there's not much to love..so i guess we better search for what we love. :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great study into all the things at one time we hate in our lives or frustrate us. Very well put, its a great write. Thank you so much for sharing.