I Hate... Poem by Whispering Rose

I Hate...

Rating: 4.2


I hate, crying in silence
And being lonely with people’s presence
I hate standing in darkness
And waiting for happiness
I hate not having a friend
And always coming second
I hate trying to be the best
And always thinking of what should be next
I hate having to choose between two
And making a decision too
I hate the promises made to be broken
And the secrets that can never be spoken
I hate changing to someone I don’t know
And people telling me what to do
I hate the words I can’t say
And when I have to walk away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Carney 07 October 2010

Great study into all the things at one time we hate in our lives or frustrate us. Very well put, its a great write. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 07 July 2010

'I hate the promises made to be broken/ And the secrets that can never be spoken/ I hate changing to someone I don’t know' These lines are my favorite another trip to my list. I think I will be reading more of your poems.

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Elena Sandu 25 June 2010

Oh dear..hate..here I think is just a word to show the the things that doesn't make you happy..I enjoyed quite a few of your poems and I can see(I think,) that deep inside your heart hate doesn't really have a place.Hate..nothing but a word.. All these sorrows..they help you make such beautiful poems! ! Sometimes its good to be unhappy or lonely..gives you space and reason to write.. I bet you wouldn't be here if you were part of the ''contended'' ones..So dear (such a beautiful name! !) Wispering Rose: Go on! ! Write whatever gets into your mind, heart or soul and share with us! Hopefully, there will always be some souls to see a mirror or relate somehow to you.. Thank you

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Emeka Chunye 22 April 2010

@ least i share somethings with u, the things u hate i hate too. well put.

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it's really a nice one to read as it beautifully depicts how you feel.. but look at those lines, there's so much there to hate..and in real also there's not much to love..so i guess we better search for what we love. :)

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