Whispering Rose

Rookie (14/10/1990 / Algeria)

I Hate...


I hate, crying in silence
And being lonely with people’s presence
I hate standing in darkness
And waiting for happiness
I hate not having a friend
And always coming second
I hate trying to be the best
And always thinking of what should be next
I hate having to choose between two
And making a decision too
I hate the promises made to be broken
And the secrets that can never be spoken
I hate changing to someone I don’t know
And people telling me what to do
I hate the words I can’t say
And when I have to walk away

Submitted: Tuesday, April 20, 2010
Edited: Saturday, May 07, 2011

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  • Rookie Kevin Carney (10/7/2010 12:14:00 AM)

    Great study into all the things at one time we hate in our lives or frustrate us. Very well put, its a great write. Thank you so much for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Darrin Mcmiller Jr. (7/7/2010 11:26:00 AM)

    'I hate the promises made to be broken/ And the secrets that can never be spoken/ I hate changing to someone I don’t know' These lines are my favorite another trip to my list. I think I will be reading more of your poems. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,182 Points Elena Sandu (6/25/2010 12:04:00 AM)

    Oh dear..hate..here I think is just a word to show the the things that doesn't make you happy..I enjoyed quite a few of your poems and I can see(I think,) that deep inside your heart hate doesn't really have a place.Hate..nothing but a word.. All these sorrows..they help you make such beautiful poems! ! Sometimes its good to be unhappy or lonely..gives you space and reason to write.. I bet you wouldn't be here if you were part of the ''contended'' ones..So dear (such a beautiful name! !)
    Wispering Rose: Go on! ! Write whatever gets into your mind, heart or soul and share with us! Hopefully, there will always be some souls to see a mirror or relate somehow to you..
    Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Emy Chunye (4/22/2010 1:00:00 AM)

    @ least i share somethings with u, the things u hate i hate too. well put. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner (4/20/2010 11:48:00 AM)

    it's really a nice one to read as it beautifully depicts how you feel.. but look at those lines, there's so much there to hate..and in real also there's not much to love..so i guess we better search for what we love. :) (Report) Reply

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