I Feel Ya Poem by Dylan Gaudreault

I Feel Ya

Rating: 5.0


I was just playing around and said one bad thing
turned that smile in2 a frown
i'll tell you what baby girl that got me down
2 know that you're offended, acting, pretending, you ain't hurt
I should be the one defending not causing the dirt
you pull down your shirt, after I try 2 rub your belly,
you tell me nothings wrong, well your emotions are strong,
so something's going on,
tell me please, what's bothering you all this long?
I can't bare 2 see you griefing, I want 2 be pleasing,
end all this immature teasing, I will tell you the reason
I intend 2 bring you happiness and maybe even more
so i can't handle it if your heart is tore,
again your sadness is coming off stronger than before
I got tha message in my brain
and baby i'm hoping you know that I feel your pain
you are my dame, my one an only
who took me from a destiny of being lonely
you tell me don't hold me
and brush me off an act so coldly
I don't understand until you've told me
imma say this ever so boldly
te amo baby i feel ya
i don't understand, but i feel ya

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 21 August 2011

Outburst of a young soul freely spilling his love feelings through this heart touching write! Poetic talent you got my friend, keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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