'I Dont See Anything Now So Just Say What You Wanna Say....' Poem by Tina P..

'I Dont See Anything Now So Just Say What You Wanna Say....'

Rating: 4.5


used and abused
its how we do
overcoming it can be stressful
but thats all up to you

you get some friends
you like them so much
now its all irratating
even the slightest touch

act older and be mature
my one mind set goal
it eats away at my heart
it took away my soul

just wanting the simpler times
when your bed time was your only hate
but thats how life goes
you control your fate

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kye Kurion 30 April 2008

Wow it's so deep, it's such a harsh way to portray personality. You utilize such deptful techniques. Wonderfully done.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 27 April 2008

a beuatiful rendition of ones trueself. its a well written too. keep going tina.

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