I Dare To Defy Fact Poem by Simon Lawson

I Dare To Defy Fact

Rating: 4.7


We fell in love too early it seemed,
The odds were against us.
The world; cruel and mean,

Just as we found each other,
And yet all we had to do was wait.
The splitting of our paths,
Was something we could anticipate.

Now I have to conjure,
The thought in my mind,
The horrible prospect,
Of someone else you will find.

But these fears are not founded,
on our love's reality.
We must keep our worries grounded,
and as such our love is free.

Facts torment us like paper cuts to the lungs,
They attempt to strangle a little bird,
Keep her song unsung.
But escape probability we have in every way,
And maybe if we're lucky,
This love can live to see another day.

Sunday, October 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Long-distance relationships.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 03 January 2016

An insightful depiction of the strains and pressures which are brought to bear on commuter or long distance relationships, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Sabrina. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kim Barney 05 December 2015

Very hopeful ending to your poem, Sabrina. Here's hoping your love works out!

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Souren Mondal 05 December 2015

A very well written poem Sabrina. Thank you for sharing..

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Simon Lawson 05 December 2015

Thanks :)

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