I Can Feel You Poem by Jahan Zeb

I Can Feel You



I dream not riches but a night
Lit by a dim sweet moon light
Me and my sweet loving sweetheart
A sense of oneness and feeling of delight
Hand in hands and eyes in eyes
As if the whole word in front of me lies
None can we see and none can we feel
Night gets deeper, love on the rise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stevie Taite 18 October 2012

Definately a better dream than riches. To feel love like this once bathes the soul in priceless richness. very romantic write

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Persian Khushi 27 September 2012

love holding hands, looking into eyes, no need for words, the moon, dimly lit sky, my beloved and I.

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Farah Ilyas 09 June 2012

really a romantic poem indeed, vivid imagery makes ur poem more reflective

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Aditi Khandelwal 04 November 2011

A very sweet and beautiful poem...

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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