I Am Now Your Woman Poem by Pia Andersson

I Am Now Your Woman

Rating: 4.8


Leaves covering my body
laying
on earth
on soil
your sweat protecting my body
your tears in my hair
the moon is whispering
you are now his woman

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 17 September 2006

wow! wow! wow! this is superb, short, but glad i didn't miss it :) Preets

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Dr.Subhendu Kar 20 September 2006

congrats, your poem suggests truth nothing but truth, so that a woman..in relation to a man welldefined...........................

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Shane Markie 02 October 2006

The gravity of the moon controls the shifting of the ocean's tides, The warmth of a woman's love dispels night's darkness in encroaching eyes. Shane

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Jimi Doyle 02 December 2006

I love moon whipers!

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Richard Ansell 17 January 2007

whether 'simply' poetry, or based on life, this is so raw, and so honest, that it makes the reader feel...which is of course, the essence of good poetry... later sweet swede..Richard..x..

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Simone Inez Harriman 18 April 2015

So lovely Pia. Your poem has beauty in it's simplicity. Thank you. Simone :)

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Nimal Dunuhinga 13 December 2009

Touching.....deep and soft like a Woman!

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James Mclain 17 November 2009

It is true..it is deep.. too keep yourself... from being found.....iip

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 08 November 2009

LOVELY..SIMPLY DEEP..THE IMAGERY AND THOUGHT BOUNDLESS

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Akram Awadat 18 October 2009

great work, well done that's make me feel what u write

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