>≫≫≫I Am Dead And That Is Quite Long Before Poem by Abdul Wahab

>≫≫≫I Am Dead And That Is Quite Long Before

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‘’I am dead ‘’ he answers
When I ask him

Where he has been
Since I meet him last

He now sits
Along with the dead

If I wish to talk with him
I have to talk

With his dead body
If I want to meet him

I have to go
To the grave yard

He firmly believes
He is dead

Let him send
To a morgue

he can not bear any more
the foul smells

of his own dead body
So he has stopped

taking care of his own self
but what a surprise

how his dead body replies
and he says

‘’’ my consciousness tells me
To talk with you

The same again tells me
I am dead ‘’

A sense is working
against a sense

as a dead man after his death
buys fruit

from the same vendor
from the same street

and all is done
without his knowledge

after all who is sure
that your consciousness goes

along with your death
or it goes when you are dead?

can not the other way be the same
when you are alive?

you may continue
to do all the chores of daily life

but in reality
you are damn dead

here I am 'he '
and you are 'I '

and I understood long before
That I am

A dead man’s walking soul

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Copy right @ abdul wahab June 13,2013
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 June 2013

Recently I had read the quote in the face book, stating, people are dead at twenty five, but buried at seventy five and it was uttered by a famous person, who made me to think a lot, but your philosophy here is slightly confusing..otherwise a nice poem..

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Wahab Abdul 13 June 2013

i am sorry to say that one need to know a disease and a philosophy to understand the poem......and at the end i gave twist to personalities that......he is not he actually that is ''i '' and the person who is asking question that is ''you '' ....all these mixed up to make it a difficult poem.... though the language is very simple...thanks fr comment and i appreciate what you say......i love it....

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Wahab Abdul 10 January 2014

Comments on your poem'' I Am Dead And That Is Too Quite Long Before'' Commented on 1/10/2014 12: 11: 00 PM by Syam Madappattu A question on one's self..dual perception..rendered in the simplest language..I LIKE THIS POEM..

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 13 June 2013

I said already what I said, but I found out that when someone is down so far nobody can help them, because no matter what we say, they will not understand it, because they are on a slow suicide. Maybe it is better if they just go.

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Wahab Abdul 13 June 2013

there is a picture, film, where it is shown that there is no change in reality to a dead man, he does every errant as usual but he does not know, all things happen without his knowledge, this may be a fantasy or a fairy tale, but what happens after death? this remained to us as a great mystery, who can tell us for sure that our consciousness or sense of awareness goes along our death? and why not the opposite one...though few understands.....that while they are alive but in reality his essence is a big Zero, he lost his consciousness, the sense of awareness......but we continue to do our daily chores.. i think half of it is clear....

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Anita Sehgal 13 June 2013

how many of us are truly living.. most of us are walking around dead in constant fear... living without understanding what it is to really live!

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David Wood 13 June 2013

Very philosophical Abdul but I like it; disease is difficult to deal with sometimes.

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