How Great I Feel Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
How Great I Feel
Many sleepless night have passed
I have been outclassed
I need your sweet company
That is longed by many
What makes me to be pulled?
Toward you and get fooled
I don’t know exactly the reason
But I love you a nice person
It all started with great fun
I had dashed against you while you were on run
You just smiled and felt no discomfort
From that day onward we had good rapport
I stare at sky and wonder
Think about love and speak louder
I feel fortunate and lucky
You are gift to me by almighty
The wind serves me your gentle touch
I have felt many times as such
As if you were touching my whole body
I was dreaming about it already
“Oh no, ” I thought it was senseless
To think about it in her absence
I must admit it on her face
It was certainly now crucial phase
I will courageously tell
How great I feel?
When she is near with her presence
I would prefer always to take chance
UltimateMoralizer Big Picture Person6 minutes ago Not bad.
Enid Oubre 'China Fuel'6 minutes ago I feel needs to be edited a little. Some words rhymed, others didn't and seemed forced to rhyme. Comment +1 Not bad
Great Destiny McNeil7 minutes ago I kinda get it but then I don't. Comment +1 It was ok.
Andre BiggDogg Pirtle2 minutes ago I enjoyed reading your work
marvinbrato Well-penned, I like the rhyming and the substance!
Some Girl An easy to understand read Hasmukh about a now or never situation. Well written thoughts, enjoyed with a smile :)
nice Jyoti Rawat1 day ago I like to read it nice poem
wow Jawahar GuptaLess than a minute ago How Great I feel...
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Many sleepless night have passed I have been outclassed