Hole Poem by Nika McGuin

Hole

Rating: 2.8


strange the lies we tell
just to keep afloat
we build a raft
to float over hard times
by whatever means necessary

Still I wonder if the lies
we tell in desperation
could end up forming the hole
that sinks us

~Nika

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
lying just to get by
may leave you high and dry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 10 February 2014

The Downside And The Upside Of Using Lies Lies can seem at times necessary, but.... in the long run can make life more hairy. BUT, ... if at times no lies are spoken, you may end up with your life broken. BUT, again, .... use lies sparingly to be sure....so.... you don't depend on them for each cure. thanks for sharing poem and poet's note. bri :)

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 16 January 2014

Lies are the way of life now a days..............it keeps you alive in short term but drowns you in the long term........... nice reading.............nika.........short and to the point.................

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