Qistina Zaini

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HEART OF A MIRROR


Every time “I” see people…,
“I” feel great! “I” feel happy!
“I” feel happy to be with them!
“I” can see many people with many difference characters!

When they feel sad,
“I” will feel the same...
When they are laughing,
“I” will laugh too…

But now,
“I” only a pieces of an ugly mirror,
All “my” beauty has change!
“I” can see them anymore!
“I” am alone now!
Crying alone,

Submitted: Wednesday, January 11, 2006

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (3/6/2008 2:24:00 AM)

    hey..don't cry baby....i'm gonna be with you and make you happy all the time, the time of your life. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lara W.a (1/24/2006 8:32:00 AM)

    Well we all feel that way sometimes...
    This is sad and incredibly honest; u did a fine job here, Qistina. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 302 Points Uriah Hamilton (1/13/2006 1:55:00 PM)

    in my heart of hearts, I believe everyone is an angel, put great value on yourself. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mary Nagy (1/13/2006 5:29:00 AM)

    I think you've done a good job here Qistina. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Faith Elizabeth Brigham (1/13/2006 3:37:00 AM)

    a sad but profound poem...life is hard but it can be very beautiful as well...nice job!

    All my best-Faith (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Charmaine Simpson (1/13/2006 1:10:00 AM)

    Very sad poem - you will one day find comfort, happiness, and balance within yourself, then you will no longer need the approval of another person for your worth. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,222 Points john tiong chunghoo (1/11/2006 10:01:00 AM)

    well, life is a cycle of up and down. we even die one day. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Charles Chaim Wax (1/11/2006 8:50:00 AM)

    a time comes
    when I becomes
    TRUE SELF
    and bodies forht its
    own existence
    free
    and utterly honest
    a fine poem (Report) Reply

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