Jay Aguiniga

Rookie - 64 Points (Scottsbluff Nebraska)

He Believes... - Poem by Jay Aguiniga

A man believes he has vision,
Until a woman blinds him with her beauty.
A man believes he can't be touched,
Until a woman touches his soul.
A man believes he hears only what he wants to
Until a woman whispers her desires to him.
A man also believes he's invincible.
Until a woman breaks him...

Comments about He Believes... by Jay Aguiniga

  • Freshman - 537 Points Mohabeer Beeharry (8/17/2013 1:37:00 PM)

    Too much of confidence is sometimes no good. One need to be careful. Your poem reminds me of this. I am glad. Thank you.

    Mohabeer Beeharry

    Maybe you could read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 53,717 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/10/2013 12:02:00 AM)

    touching soul, right, good poem,
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 27, 2013

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