Haiti's Pain Poem by Gillena Cox

Haiti's Pain

Rating: 5.0


Toussaint, Henri, Des Salines;
Are you watching?
Dont turn your eyes away;
Their pain, is our pain, is your pain;

Many, many, many will fly,
Past the angels hungry,
To eat of souls;
Open your arms to comfort them;

Those giant turtles of legendary fancy;
Have argued, again;
Reeking havoc with your earth,
Causing your people to rush out,
Screaming in the night,
With hands grasping heads;
Here I am, here I am, here I am,

Now the ruins must be
Lifted and the half dead,
Eased out to eat dust;
Dust, that feeds life in
A war zone of the mythical ones;
Elephant bearers who shifted;

They are broken,
They are hungry, they are thirsty
Haiti's people
They have been gourged open;
Mouths opened, hearts opened;
Like sieves their tears flow;

Yet it will not wash
The grime, nor the blood,
Nor the suffering off;
This zone of war, on shifting strata;
Only time will cleanse and renew.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 15 January 2010

Wow, stark imagery. I think you've done justice to Haiti's state of desperation. Would that it were not so, but a good job of portraying it in an original way.

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Afzal Shauq 15 January 2010

wow so sweet and impressive poem about haiti state..hmmmm loved it and enjoyed alot..10/10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 January 2010

Lifted and the half dead, Eased out to eat dust; Dust, that feeds life in A war zone of the mythical ones; Elephant bearers who shifted; .................most poignant yet humanistic, by cries of innocence, heart when desiccates in crowds by the disasters, wonderful write by painful tears, well done,10+++, thanks for sahring

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Trade Martin 16 January 2010

Inspirational...., good work....! ! !

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Marieta Maglas 16 January 2010

nice simile Mouths opened, hearts opened; Like sieves their tears flow; very well written symbolistic poem 10/10

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Chinedu Dike 02 December 2019

A sad story of deprivation told in good diction with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Deepak Amembal 29 March 2010

poignancy is palpable

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Obinna Eruchie 06 February 2010

Thoughtful words on the disaster that happened in Haiti. I hope and pray for things to return to normal for the Haitians.

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Allemagne Roßmann 22 January 2010

Tell them to listen noted British Jew singer Amy Winehouse's -number-'Tears dry on their own'--there will not be any length, breadth or height of Haiti's pain-there will be joy forever.10+

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Allemagne Roßmann 22 January 2010

Tell them to listen noted British Jew singer Amy Winehouse's -number-'Tears dry on their own'--there will not be any length, breadth or height of Haiti's pain-there will be joy forever.

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