Haiku Of Hockey Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Haiku Of Hockey

Rating: 4.2


She had lovely fast running legs,
And mighty arms reaching bottom of the kegs,
Adventurous lips, winning wine filled in pegs,
Romantic and exciting to watch her moving,
How nicely she dodged and succeeded in kissing.

In the left and right the beauty for backing,
In the center at half the sexy tracking,
An artist she was in her lovely love making.

Classical hockey was a poem of Keats,
Hockey on astroturf is a battle of beasts.

I no more watch her wild ugly kissing.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Astroturf has finished the beauty of Hockey.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalid Saifullah 18 February 2015

A good haiku of classical hockey.................10

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Bri Edwards 19 May 2014

i think i lack some knowledge of hockey [field hocky, not ice hockey? , or is it a sport i am not familiar at all with OR with which i am not at all familiar], haiku, and keats AND you, to be able to understand and fully appreciate this poem. i DO enjoy some rhyming here. thanks for sharing. :) bri

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Sarmad Mirza 09 May 2014

The 5,3,2,1 Asian style formation of Hockey in the poem. Liked it.

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