Haiku-Iv Poem by Shreej k.c
Haiku-Iv
Rating: ★3.5
a lone cloud
in the early summer sky
fights for rainy cause
Tuesday, May 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fighter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
haiku-a classical one proves to be a tough job for me! Well, the practice goes on..this one is inspired by one of the pictures my friend posted on fb, I happened to just rearrange his caption and hence bear no credit for this. I don't even know if it's a part of lyrics of some song or his
own words! Will find out soon when he replies.
own words! Will find out soon when he replies.
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Ratnakar Mandlik
10 May 2016
Amazing manifestation of nature captured in a haiku. Thanks for sharing.
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4/25/2024 11:10:55 PM # 1.0.0.1119
no, no 'kireji' in this one.. plus.. I have some doubts about your final line: ''fights for rainy cause'' is sort of 'analyzing the situation'.. not a classical concept
my pleasure, dear K.C. ;) and don't get frustrated when your haiku is not 100% ok.. ;)
I thought so! I think I will have to go about haiku all over again when I get some free time..I could see you have provided us with an article sort in the forum. I scanned through it but may its like mind reads only what it already knows with such fast reading! Will be going through it again and some more research whenever I get time! Thank you for the comment :)