Haiku- A Thought Poem by Valsa George

Haiku- A Thought

Rating: 4.9


Climb up a mountain
Not to look on garbage pile
But to see beauty

Thursday, April 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,wisdom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 07 April 2018

We undertake an arduous journey for noble goals; else the effort be wasted. I love the many ways that one can look at this well crafted haiku. Thanks Valsa.

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Jaya Das 05 April 2018

Beautiful haiku....and well said though it is difficult to climb the mountain....but the beauty on reaching it is ethereal

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Hazel Durham 05 April 2018

The journey can be difficult but the destination is worth it for the unforgettable beauty of the view! Beautiful write!

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Rini Shibu 05 April 2018

Nice haiku, there is negatives and positive, but look for the positive, life will be more beautiful

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Geetha Jayakumar 05 April 2018

Great wisdom in those lines. Climbing all the way to mountain viewing just beauty despite all hurdles.

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Anjandev Roy 23 November 2019

Glorious haiku. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Mj Lemon 03 February 2019

Such a great thought, Valsa...Always look up, not down. This goes straight to myfavourites.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 May 2018

When we achieve any success after a lot of efforts, we should look around for the beauty of the positive things rather than the filthy negative ones. An excellent thought communicated in so few words, well done Valsa!

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Muhammad Ali 30 April 2018

Yes, there should be positivity in our efforts, goals and our manners when we are the reachers. beautiful haiku

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 April 2018

Wonderful juxtaposition! Wonderfully composed haiku!

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