sabrina seriva

Rookie - 0 Points (1996 / oklahoma)

Good Bye - Poem by sabrina seriva

ill never for give you.
ill never forgive u, for stealling my heart breaking it to peices and throwing them on the ground.
ill never forgive the things you did.
ill never forgive the ways you lied.
and now i say good bye,
the slick silver blade reaches my wrist,
the crimson blood pours down my arm,
as shining tears pour from my eyes,
i pull the blade away and start a new line
... more blood pours,
...more tears fall,
my spirit disappearing,
my soul leaving
my life ending,
vision going black,
but then i hear a voice,
this voice telling me not to go to come back to them,
i feel something drip to my face
tears? .... but not mine
who is this voice i know it cant be you
u left me in the dust i wont come back
not even for you
so now i must say...
good bye.

Comments about Good Bye by sabrina seriva

  • Rookie - 0 Points Daryl L. Widder (5/5/2011 11:38:00 AM)

    your passion and feelings are astonishing it gave me goosebumps good job please if you will read my renovation poem it may touch you (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 7 Points Mohammad Akmal Nazir (5/5/2011 11:08:00 AM)

    I liked the poem. Wonderfully written. Fine poetics. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 5, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, May 6, 2011

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