Gone Poem by Makayla Straight

Gone



You are gone
Gone for good
Nothing I can say could bring you back to me
You are gone from this world
You are in heaven where there is no evil only good
I wish you know how much I miss you
I wish you know how much I love you
I hope you are awaiting for me
I hope you are happy
And I hope you lived your life the way you wanted to

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robin Dewalt 01 June 2009

A few corrections... I wish you 'knew' not 'know' - The last line is very good. It makes me feel that the person who passed on committed suicide.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 31 May 2009

Toucy composition 10+++

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Makayla Straight

Makayla Straight

I was Born in Tuscon Then I moved to Phoenix
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