My Advice Of Love Poem by Makayla Straight

My Advice Of Love

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Pain could bring love.
Love could bring pain.
Just keep your head up high.
Never look down.
Don’t give up.
You know you’re better than that.
One day you’ll find happiness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shekhar Joshi 17 May 2009

You write so deep... lovely poem

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Angie Estrada 11 May 2009

This is a nice piece of advice

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you have explained the aspects of love amazingly..perfectly even..magnificent poem my friend

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Christopher Lee 05 May 2009

you are right...correct philosophy...great writing from tiny hands...great poem

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Muhammad Ali 05 May 2009

a different title... but what i am happy to see is the real mature thinking of your Kay! I like this poem :) 10.. Ali

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Makayla Straight

Makayla Straight

I was Born in Tuscon Then I moved to Phoenix
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