Please Just Give Up Poem by Makayla Straight

Please Just Give Up

Rating: 5.0


Everybody has given up on me.

I don't care anymore.

There is no point in living anymore.

Sooner or later I am going to die, .

I rather have it NOW!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny H 24 January 2010

been there felt that, fight the will to end it all, try to be happy and hold on to hope for the future thats what im doing

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don't give up kay-kay I'll be here for you

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Robin Dewalt 01 June 2009

A great way to express ourselves is through poetry. I like free verse and I would love to see you expand on this one. After you have done so, I'd like to read one where you write about how you haven't given up on yourself. There is a strength within you, keep searching.

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the days will heal the wounds..be strong..another love will come so soon..a painful touching poem

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Makayla Straight

Makayla Straight

I was Born in Tuscon Then I moved to Phoenix
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