Going Forward To A Better World Poem by Sandra Feldman

Going Forward To A Better World

Rating: 5.0


Lets put it all together
And throw the dice once more,
Life is but a constant dance,
A new adventure, taking a chance,
Never should you close the door,
An open mind, a generous heart
Will get you further,
Than you ever thought,
You could go.
Always start a new adventure
By being better
Than you were before,
By looking forward
To a better World
Where Love and Truth,
Are holding hands,
Building bonds of brotherhood,
Gifted to all Lands.
And hands are used
To open doors.
Not buried in the sand.

Wednesday, May 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,peace,hope
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Going forward, the American Way, no matter what others say.
We never give up!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 23 May 2018

Sandra, such an inspiring and heartwarming poem...10++++

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Robert Murray Smith 23 May 2018

Sandra, a really positive write. This poem has the world begining a new dawn. Let's hope the sun keeps shining.+++10 Robert

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Susan Williams 23 May 2018

Very positive poem, quite upbeat about the possibilities in life. I don't think that is a common attitude these days. People wear such despondent faces these days- sometimes I think it is because modern technology brings us news from all over the world- places we don't even know exist- in a matter of moment we know a child has been murdered in Scotland, a school attacked in Texas, a restaurant bombed in Algiers, , and on and on. We need your voice, my dear!

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Robert Murray Smith 14 June 2018

An inspirational write Sandra.++10

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Eugene Levich 23 May 2018

Good advice from a smart and lovely lady!

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Bill Cantrell 23 May 2018

I love this very positive poem Sandra, all poetry should be as such!

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Valsa George 23 May 2018

This is a beautiful write sparkling with hope! Yes, there glimmers a light and it invites us to move forward to a fresh beginning, holding each other's hands. What we need is an open heart and a sense of adventure and the determination never to give up even if the path proves strewn with hurdles! Love every line of this! A huge 10

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Richard Wlodarski 23 May 2018

Love it! So motivational and inspirational! A new dawn is upon us. Let's all march to the beat of the lover. Not the executioner!

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