Ravi Sathasivam


God's Gift - Nature........... - Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

When the beautiful morning comes
The rays of rising sun kiss her
When the garden of nature open its heart
The garden of flowers hugs her to welcome
When the trees dance to tune of wind
The birds singing to the nature's choir
When the gentleness of nature is filled pleasure
Then the earth get wet with weather
When the nature forgets its vastness
Then the God shows her how big her place on earth
Let us thank God for his creation and given us
eyes to see lovely gift - Nature


Comments about God's Gift - Nature........... by Ravi Sathasivam

  • Veteran Poet - 1,988 Points Phanice Wamukota (6/23/2015 7:02:00 AM)

    Superbly thought through, (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,962 Points Soulful Heart (12/11/2014 12:26:00 AM)

    a thankgiving in superb verse.......good poem of god gifted nature....simple words with perfect effect (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,962 Points Soulful Heart (12/11/2014 12:25:00 AM)

    a thankgiving in superb verse.......good poem of god gifted nature....simple words with perfect effect (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,238 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (6/15/2014 3:43:00 AM)

    A good nature poem and it is felt beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Omar Ibrahim (9/30/2009 3:10:00 AM)

    i liked the metaphors in this poem.....you know how to use the metaphor well i hope i can use it well like you.....good job...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Risha : Ahmed (3/4/2007 8:21:00 AM)

    it is really a beautiful poem. Loved it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nalini Hebbar (6/24/2006 1:33:00 AM)

    a very nice poem about nature...you have used soft words to bring about a very sobering effect on the reader (Report) Reply

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Read poems about / on: nature, weather, dance, kiss, beautiful, wind, god, sun, heart, flower, rose, thanks, tree



Poem Submitted: Monday, October 18, 2004

Poem Edited: Friday, April 9, 2010


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