God.. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA
God..
god is the creator,
he can make your life a whole lot better,
god is beatiful,
he can create a miracle,
god can hear all prayers,
he lives in the heavens upstairs,
god loves us all,
he is not that far just give'em a call,
god won't let you fall,
he will make you stand tall,
god will always be there,
he will always care,
god will forgive,
and in our harts he will always live.
01/19/2009
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia
I would have preferred a stronger last line, but the structure was fine. I likethe repetition. I wish it had more internal rhythm though. Overall, very good. GW62
Not a bad write, Jose, despite the numerous repetitions. You got your point across to the reader very effectively, and every word you said it quite true! Carl.
I simply love it. It what God does in our life if your willing to look for him, thank you for writing this. Its made my day, ^_^
i like this! ! ! it is very very true wut our creator does.....good job 10/10
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4/24/2024 10:30:30 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Awesome poem! Yep God sure is the greatest! ! You sure get a 10! ! Great work! Lisa