Good Vs. Evil. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA

Good Vs. Evil.

Rating: 4.0


when i close my eyes at night,
the war i just begun to fight,
visions of lights disappear,
and nightmares reapear,
shribling with fear,
that my screams no one will hear,
and all do god is near,
the devil is right here.

Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vinod Kumar 06 January 2009

Good poem, actually night and blindness better for us now-a-days, open eyes cant see the picture happening sorrundings to us, so devils and nightmares are appearing day time only. night and darkness are a better my dear

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Miss Unknown Empty 12 August 2009

Beautiful piece very deep. Where I'm from we snap our fingers for great poems so I'll give this one 20 snaps Great job

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Luis Alvarado 07 January 2009

Good will always prevail over evil. In due time those nightmares will turn into dreams of good. Keep praying! ! !

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Thanks a lot 07 May 2019

YOU JUST HELPED ME WITH MY ENGLISH CLASS YOU ARE A FREAKING BLESSING! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Penn High B2 07 May 2019

OML I LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH! ! IT IS REALLY GOOD AND MADE ME CRYYY

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me poet yeps poet 21 November 2018

WHY YOU CLOSE YOUR EYES TO ALLOW DEVIL TO FLY SAY HIM GOODBY CHANGE YOUR SLEEP TIME

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Phoebe Soh Xin 25 January 2016

Shribling?? Is that an English word?

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hello 07 May 2019

Um hello have you never heard of that word? ? ? I use every single day and my kids and I love using it to describe things. I hope that you can respect that and stop attacking my freaking life! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank you and have a shribling day.

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M.j. Henderson 02 January 2012

this is a simple but nice poem... i can relate 2 this poem alot nd really enjoyed it: 0 never lose touch with ur gift... no1 can have wat u have: D

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Afzal Shauq 19 September 2009

a sweet poem and well written.. true what you said is really true..liked it and enjoydit.. wish you do same poetry...good fow of refeined vereses..well done 10/10

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