Go Ahead Poem by Lin Lilin

Go Ahead



Hiding behind the door
Why you don't come up instead
Special guest wanna give sweet greeting to you

Diving in the water
Why you don't sitting in a boat and took the paddle together, instead
It's not a big deal
If you just stay in there only with yourself
Big stream could came
From the deepest, from the calmness sea

Go Ahead
There is a way
You believe, so you have to bear out
Brave yourself, like fire
Please calm like a water
Go Ahead

Saturday, July 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: motivation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dedan Onyango 18 July 2015

Hey Lin, Go ahead with your writing. Nice piece

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Lin Lilin 18 July 2015

Thank you Dedan :) Yes, I will go ahead, that was just beginning hehhee :) my first day in here, happily look so much poets, including you Dedan

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Lin Lilin 18 July 2015

Hi Dedan, thank you for your comment :) Yes, I will go ahead, it was just my beginning writting poem in here, and so much happy to see lots of poets in here, including you :)

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Lin Lilin 18 July 2015

Thank you Dedan :) Yes, I will. That was my beginning to writting poem in here and happily, look how much poets in here, It's amazed me

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 July 2015

Very nice poem.Keep writing.

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Lin Lilin 18 July 2015

So much thanks Tiku :) I hope, I keep on writting poems in here or wherever I can :)

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