White Poem by Lin Lilin

White

Rating: 3.5


Lights up
White
Isn't that beautiful
Bring me to the quitness

White
Pick me up to the sky
Reach on top
Just you and I
Dealing with the knowing about it

White
Just you and I
Who take the question and definitely you've got the answer
Where placed on top
And I say, it wouldn't be easy for me
So, White
I beg you
Stay with me, please

Saturday, July 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: secret
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akachukwu Lekwauwa 18 July 2015

Oh come get me White Come take me along the isle To our 'I do I do' For our love's sake stay forever, White. I enjoyed your poem Lin, keep writing.

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Fabrizio Frosini 18 July 2015

Love.. the real engine of life itself.. All of us (normal people) need to love and being loved.. greetings from Italy, Lin

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Lin Lilin 18 July 2015

Hi Fabrizio :) Thank you for your comment. This is my first day post my poem, and i'm happy to see another poet in here, including you. Also, greetings from Indonesia, Fabrizio :)

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