Gnawing (Freedom) Poem by Eric Cockrell

Gnawing (Freedom)

Rating: 3.6


freedom
gnawing
at my
gut...

a rat
gnawing
on
the
ropes...

that
my fears
use
to
bind
me...

freedom, the oldest
primeval urge,
the grunting of
the darkness
as light opens
the door!

freedom...
the
raw
heart
beating...
in the
hands
of the
priest...

as the body
is flung from
the cliff...

the sound a rose
makes when it blooms!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 22 August 2011

Like this poem. Take a look at my new one called, Boy to a man. You. Might like one Called, for michael hicky. A true story. The two of them are true storys. Best wishes Dave

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Smoky Hoss 22 August 2011

Freedom is the heart, and the pure guts, of life, it's why we all get out of bed morning after morning. Great poem!

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Craig Anderson 22 August 2011

I won't be able to look at a rose again without think of this piece. I have never considered the rose as blooming for freedom. Wonderful Piece Eric. Best Regards as always Craig.

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