Get Blamed..... Poem by Jaya Varma

Get Blamed.....



Its time
to get blamed
to realize
the done and undone
don't get upset
my heart
if you see the faces turning away
tht's what you have earned
won't you recieve the same way
no reason to get shattered
has anything ever mattered
besides your own decisions n desires
take it easy
if they play bitter
you have neither been sweeter
don't be insane
come back to the real world
you have been defamed
by your own deeds
now while you sit and cry
hiding in your room
it has no worth
nobody cares
for the tears
you have given them enough
take my advice
stop ruining it further
it would lead to nowhere
don't count
what is lost
take care
of that you still have
they are enough
for one true breath
come out of the room
the sun has still not been doomed
its waiting for you
smile for it
before it sets
take my advice
don't lose
that is still with you
safe and nice..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jaya Varma 14 August 2013

Wonderful! ! I am so pleased to get such honest comments and open views here and such healthy discussions have always been important for nourishing any poem..Thank you so much all of of you for being a part of my small efforts! ! Would always be waiting for such honest and blunt comments on other poems too! ! :)

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Lyn Paul 14 August 2013

What Geetha has spoken is very true. Overall we must express our feelings. Have you ever heard that saying Don't wear your heart on your sleeve? Thank you so much Jaya

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Jaya Varma 14 August 2013

True Geetha Ji..but sometimes..to avoid the outburst on a wrong time..it becomes important to give it an easy and proper channel..thats what i have tried to do here..and i am really happy that you like it :)

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Geetha Jayakumar 14 August 2013

Past is dead, future is yet to come.....think about bright future rather than dwelling in past...but past teach us something worth...that can be corrected in future..Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.

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