Genuflected Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

The Divine defies us to see it in small things... some have lost this ability. Excellent! 10! Thanks for your comments on ' unconquerable'.

immediately closer ones they are...we are at oue knees to them..since we use them...robots would become more than man...dangerously mor...a nice thought

i love the way you write. a good focus. shan

a very powerful and deep write Sarkar..... you use 2 of the most poluted machines ever invented in this master piece of yours very beautifully, i might got it wrong but still it is amazing piece....thanks for you precious comments on my work.....many 10'sssss and A'ssssss ' A men invented menace for itself to destruct the beauty of nature and peace' - asif rgds asif

We are all in praise of the modern technology invented for they make our life easier and happier...though at times takes into negativity as the abuse sprout in....10+++

you have indeed written this one in the most artistic abstract way imaginable..giving it a rythmn all its own....very enjoyable while humbling at the same time..

Thank you very much for sharing this poem with us. Great observations. Kudos.

inventive doesn't seem to do it justice. you bring the language alive as if you made it up yourself. and as always you use your gift to bring us a glimpse of the spiritual essence in all things. Thank you, Ashraful, for not just reflecting but creating beauty itself.

Thank you for birthing this poem to the world. Eternal thanks, kind sir.

A rickshaw and a motorcycle on a moonlit night. What a captivating imagist you are.Your power to create will overcome all obstacles of human invention.10/10 Warm regards, Sandra