Friend On Line Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Friend On Line

Rating: 5.0


My poetess friend is on line
Would love for poems to find day's shine
I was really impressed for keen interest
It was in general for best interest

A publisher is good link for purpose
Whole trust is to be put and reposed
I was falling to her proposal
It was new bond waiting for revival

She was touching heart and coming near
I too had had nice feeling of love and dear
I named her "Kajol"* as she had told me once
She was sure of having some resemblance

I told her name to appear in preface
Another mask for putting on face
She was anxious for being her in preface
I found some keen interest with feeling trace

She was thee making inroad
Heavily riding on mind with immense load
I was sinking with her brilliance
She was sure there to show up with intelligence

"She will buy it first" confident was her reply
I was hell bent to go her near by
She had consented to appear on the face of book
I disbelieved it and unwillingly allowed head to shake

The poems had touched 3000 mark
It was lovely beginning and good start
She was there to praise and take stock
I was waiting for some ticks from the clock

I was in fact growing old
But kept approach very bold
It is necessary to feel young at heart
Poetry is such good form of an art

She was quick at my back
Posted questions about what is at stake
Life is not simple like cake
It has to be honest and not fake

I wondered at her philosophy
She was plain but as if blessed by almighty
Right from day one she had clear vision
Not much to be left behind as confusion

I wished her success and good start
She was coming up with part by part
Touching simple way and putting across
I was very much happy and felt at no loss

Kajol… Indian famous actress

(To be concluded)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 March 2012

Marietta Mardirossian I REALLY LOVE IT! ?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 March 2012

My poetess friend is on line Would love for poems to find day’s shine

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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