Forever Poem by Shelley Caines

Forever

Rating: 3.8


When I look into your eyes,
And see your bright smile,
I feel that you can touch my heart,
When you say that you love me.
This feeling I have,
That forever is ours,
No matter the season or weather,
our hearts are filled with the same kinda magic,
And the love that first brought us together
Forever is when,
You have a bright smile,
And warm, caring words build magic in me heart,
That's what brought us together

Written in 2001. This is part of the first song that my cousin and I wrote when we were kids and started a band.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 14 August 2008

This is written very clearly, but there is not much other than the simple expression to compel a reader to continue on. I wish there was more. It is just too simple. GW62

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