hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 38,007 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

For Self Ego - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Whether you think positive
Or negative
It matters less
So long you fail to witness

How come divine light in between?
When you see no definite line
You do not know even simple existence
And talk of divine chance

Whether man or woman
You can create heaven
With no mention of high moral
But with resolve to break the hatred wall

Speak of real love
And silently believe
Life is to live with peace
Make others to feel at ease

The other words are merely to fool
We are simple becoming tool
Play in other's hand
Turn foes from friends

Confine to self alright
But do not fight
Over supremacy or for self ego
That shall invite your down fall and blow


Comments about For Self Ego by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/11/2014 8:32:00 PM)

    I could understand the thought behind the poem. Warm regards,

    Supratik Sen, Hyderabad
    Jun 11,2014
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  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/11/2014 8:32:00 PM)

    educative and great poem.

    partha sarathi paul, guskara-burdwan
    Jun 11,2014 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2014 10:19:00 AM)

    Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh!
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  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2014 10:19:00 AM)

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome Rohani Daud, and Shujat Ahmad like this.
    Just now · Unlike · 1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2014 7:49:00 AM)

    Love


    Dev Parkash Nischal2 minutes ago
    Nothing is more powerful than love. Beautiful poem.
    Comment +1



    Jan Hansen3 minutes ago
    excellent poem
    Comment +1
    ego


    Charles Woodruff Jr.3 minutes ago
    nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2014 7:48:00 AM)

    very interesting


    Chris Solomonc2 minutes ago
    It is honestly a tad bit early in the morning here and i have not slept yet, but this seems very positive!
    Comment +1
    Love


    Dev Parkash Nischal2 minutes ago
    Nothing is more powerful than love. Beautiful poem.
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  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2014 7:48:00 AM)

    deep thinker


    Jan Hansen3 minutes ago
    excellent poem
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  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2014 7:47:00 AM)

    ego


    Charles Woodruff Jr.3 minutes ago
    nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2014 7:30:00 AM)

    Whether you think positive
    Or negative (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 9, 2014



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