Foggy Feat Poem by Indira Renganathan

Foggy Feat

Rating: 5.0

Fog through the dense woods
A 'hide and seek' play in vain
Quest of breath throughout

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Venkat Easwaran 21 February 2024

Meaningful, beyond the rich imagery it brings. Nice three liner. Tfs

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Terence George Craddock 16 February 2024

hidden breath of diverse life living souls hides in dense fog fill woods when life pace slows to take a pause breath

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Terence George Craddock 20 February 2024

I wrote the poems 'Hidden Breath' and 'Fog Mist Slows', inspired by the poem 'Foggy Feat', by the poet Indira Renganathan and dedicated to the poet Indira Renganathan.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 February 2024

Indeed, fog will render the game of hide and seek futile specially in the dense woods. The images in this amazing poem are very compelling. Loved it!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 February 2024

Loved the concept of quest breath.... liked this wonderful three-liner

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