Fog through the dense woods
A 'hide and seek' play in vain
Quest of breath throughout
hidden breath of diverse life living souls hides in dense fog fill woods when life pace slows to take a pause breath
I wrote the poems 'Hidden Breath' and 'Fog Mist Slows', inspired by the poem 'Foggy Feat', by the poet Indira Renganathan and dedicated to the poet Indira Renganathan.
Indeed, fog will render the game of hide and seek futile specially in the dense woods. The images in this amazing poem are very compelling. Loved it!
Loved the concept of quest breath.... liked this wonderful three-liner
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Meaningful, beyond the rich imagery it brings. Nice three liner. Tfs