First Attempt Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

First Attempt



First attempt

How helpless we are?
When memories rush there
Occupy mind
And find space

It takes hours
To peter away
But the day is occupied
And no argument is laid

It was sweet moment
When you were present
With that beautiful occasion
It was really first attempt for good relation

The situation took turn
The gesture was returned
With cold response
It had made you sad and tense

So when you are free and wish to memorize
It easily invades mind and comprises
Full rehearsal of past incidences
It is repeat of promising sentences

First Attempt
Sunday, February 12, 2017
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 February 2017

Sudipto Roy excellent lines......! ! ! beautiful image........ Unlike · Reply · 1 · 3 hrs

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 February 2017

welcoem sudip roy Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 February 2017

Patricia Amundsen Beautiful lines and image, thanks Unlike · Reply · 1 · 4 hrs

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 February 2017

welcoem patricia amundsen Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 February 2017

So when you are free and wish to memorize It easily invades mind and comprises Full rehearsal of past incidences It is repeat of promising sentences

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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