Fireworks Poem by Jemima Rivas

Fireworks

Rating: 3.5


In the gloominess of night
Hearts shivered continuously
Like magnets they pulled together quickly
In a car park filled of cars
Where drizzled waters had left remnants
Plastered across the shining windscreens
One was the lighter
The other was the bum
Then together they made a colorful night
By creating fireworks
They made such strange noises
That attracted nearby passerby’s....
But fireworks never last forever it’s a sadly costly joy....
For another day I saw her on the spot
Didn't realize at first I was thinking a lot
“Hi doll sup”
I trembled when I saw her stare up at me
For she was crying bitterly
Then she did the scariest thing
She snatched me and emptied her trouble
I guess all who likes fireworks should decline
For all they leave is rubbish behind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kanav Justa 21 March 2014

...I guess all who likes fireworks should decline For all they leave is rubbish behind , , , ' nice and meaningful lines, , ,

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Jemima Rivas 23 December 2013

thank you :)

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Rishabh Bidya 22 December 2013

Wow! ! Great work indeed! ! : D

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Jemima Rivas 26 April 2015

thank you

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 06 August 2013

good poem for good though thanks for sharing

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Dave Walker 01 August 2013

A great poem, fireworks of life can fizzle out, but sometimes they can last forever.

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