This Toy Is Broken Poem by Jemima Rivas

This Toy Is Broken

Rating: 4.8


Life is this road I’m walking
Still is this peace am feeling
When am down am down
When am up am up
When am walking this road, empty is this hate am feeling
I’ve lost my twin not to marriage but to a broken heart
Can but two broken hearts mend?
I’m on the shelf am waiting
People past and stare and envy at my outstanding marvellous beauty
What they don’t know is that I’m on the shelf because I’m broken 

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 April 2016

When am down am down When am up am up When am walking this road, empty is this hate am feeling I’ve lost my twin not to marriage but to a broken heart Can but two broken hearts mend? I’m on the shelf am waiting Oh dear poet...this one is a classic one. I just loved every word of it. It was a pleasurable reading. Thanks for sharing the poem. I invite you to my page and to give your valuable rating and remarks on my poems. 10 for this poem.. Thanks. Subhas

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 March 2014

Woah aha attractive eh! Gorgeous to read. Real life's interesting styled poem! Tc.

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Jemima Rivas 26 April 2015

thank you :)

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