Finding Self Poem by M.J. Lemon

Finding Self

Rating: 5.0


feeling good after
asking one-armed kung fu stars
to move a sofa

Saturday, October 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: comedy,irony,self discovery,selfish ,tragedy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 04 April 2020

When we overlook the disability and ask a person to do something near impossible, I think we are indirectly pumping a little positivity into his spirit that will push him into doing it! More than humour, I see this three liner as a psychological boost to the handicapped! I don't know how far I am right in my interpretation.....

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Mj Lemon 04 April 2020

Valsa, that is an absolutely brilliant insight and superb interpretation. Thank you so much.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2018

It is my pleasure to read this poem time and again.

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Mj Lemon 29 November 2018

So much appreciated, Kumarmani.

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Bri Edwards 16 December 2017

well, sooooooooooooo...... what's the problem? ! four of them could do it handily! and they could use their feet if need be, in which case they could do it feetily. bri :)

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Mj Lemon 17 December 2017

Hey Bri, Ever the problem-solver!

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Susan Williams 25 October 2017

I read the comments below and now I feel a bit dumb. I see the humor of this picture of one-armed kung fu stars lifting a sofa for the narrator.. But I was seeing a wistfulness, a sadness, in this piece. I pictured an aging man wanting to move a sofa saying these 3 lines in a very sarcastic bitter tone of voice. I know readers will find different things in a poem because of their background, experiences, age, gender, etc. But just how far off was I on this? 10+++++++++++++++++++ for originality and memorability and intelligence

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Mj Lemon 25 October 2017

Hi Susan, thank you so much...and indeed I had a similar thought when I finally finished this poem. I tweaked a line and then realized- it could tip into either comedy or tragedy. I think there is a very fine line separating the two. Aging and resenting- -yes, those were in mind....

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Simone Inez Harriman 18 October 2017

That was a funny image and reading Soul's comment made me laugh harder at the vision of being flung with the sofa. Sober thoughts after reading your topics of the poem. Sometimes we may ask the impossible to witness the struggle.

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Mj Lemon 24 October 2017

Thank you, Simone. Absolutely true...How many times do we ask the impossible, just to see what happens? I suspect more often than we even think.

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