Favourite Words Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Favourite Words

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Favourite words

The shock was severe
She left for heavenly door
I could do nothing
I watched helplessly in the social ring

I had no logic behind
She was devoted and remained kind
I watched hollowness of the sky
As earth or sky now feeling shy

There is gloom on the face
There is no place
In this world and I fear now
The tragic incidence has taken place any how

We discussed happy stories
As she was to be released from I.C.U
"I will take bath first when reach home"
We eagerly awaited her home coming

The night was so horrifying
The news was terrifying
She developed attach all of sudden
She was pushed into coma and never regained again

I see four walls
And give call
But no response comes forward
I call again with her favourite words

Sunday, October 8, 2017
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2017

welcome aman pandey......

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2017

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2017

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2017

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2017

No logic was devoted behind shock. While no response comes forward this provokes thought entirely. Sometimes still we discussed happy stories. Calling her again with favorite words bring emotion. Nicely penned poem is shared here.10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2017

welcome Manisha mehta Like · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2017

Hasmukh Mehta Nidhi kunvrani Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2017

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 October 2017

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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