Father Poem by Makayla Straight

Father

Rating: 5.0


F is for a fantastic father you are.
A is for awesome buddy
T is for treasures of the night’s Star
H is for heart who cuddles
E is for excitement of my life
R is for responsible for any wife

This is my father I write about.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 07 June 2009

Excellent write Mak, I love your father. A nice form/way of expression,10+

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Mario Rios Pinot 08 May 2009

Makayla, what a wonderful poem. Intertesting subject...picking a subject: envy, love, hate, lonliness, suicide and then writing the living daylights out of it...sort of discovering our feelings. Get in touch with our feelings. How are you anyway?

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Christopher Lee 05 May 2009

father and mother have occupied you full which is natural flowing out thro' the wonderful pen

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Makayla Straight

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I was Born in Tuscon Then I moved to Phoenix
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