Falling Proposal Poem by Kranthi Pothineni
Falling Proposal
Propose me if you want to marry me
And impress me if you love to walk
But don't use this natures beauty
Like moon, flowers, stars, dove, sky
sea, sunrise and many more, to move me
Don't use words to flatter my ego
Like eyes are so, smile is so, so and so
Cause we all are part of this nature
And even without the word love
She said with a curve on her clean face
Colorless will be my colorful song
Without the use of natures beauty in it
So is it even without your beauty in it
But let my colorful dreams paint it
In which I sing this song for you, I said
Everyday I want to awake by your side
Everyday my first light should be you
My first song should be your breath
Everyday I want to rise and set my eyes
By saying 'i love you', else will set forever
Slowly she came close and said 'i love you'
Sorry for using the word 'love' she whispered
I stopped my song, smiled and started all again
Again and again I used the same note to fall
Waiting for day, when she sings her song for me
a very powerful beautiful poem. the truth is in your words, for words are what describes everything in life and gives it the colors of beauty. GR888888T!
Everyday my first light should be you wonderful visual metaphor, wonderful lyric poem 10+++++++++
the structure of the poem is well organized and this is a fine literary piece.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/1/2024 8:52:27 PM # 1.0.0.1119
very cool poem! ! ! ! ! I really like the something that could only be you, good job! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (10)