Fading Into Nothing Poem by Evy Moore

Fading Into Nothing

Rating: 5.0


Movement useless like an inanimate object
Emotions stop, gradually fading into time
My heart beat decreases, my soul deteriorates like wood to ashes

Skin now wan, silently screams in pain as it rots uncontrollably
In sides dark as the lightless world, bursting with toxic fumes
I lie silently on the ground decomposing, fading into nothing

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joshua Fegley 23 October 2006

Morbid......very morbid; I like it. Laters...Joshua.

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Alison Cassidy 16 September 2006

Evy, Great to see you dipping into free verse. This poem shares strong feelings of hopelessness and I like the title very much. Well done. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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