Forgotten Poem by Evy Moore

Aaay i thought this was off the chain ... very vivid and descriptive It reminds me of one of mine 'Lurkin in my loneliness' Check it out sometime if you like Catch ya later Leo

I have been reading your poems and they are very emotional, well versed and a joy to read. I think you should keep writing. My only critique is to watch your spelling. I really liked this poem but I was a little thrown at the words ' dual and dark' 'doomed to wonder' and 'without a dout'. It threw the mood off a little and I wondered if you meant: 'dull and dark' doomed to wander' and 'without a doubt'. You are one of the few who can understand the joy of words.: -)

'A shattered soul...' beautiful and moving poem this - very well done, Steve

*Crys for the entire night* Evy...I love you so much. You are so much like me. I love your poems and they touch me.I have never in my life read a poem that has touched me the way yours do. They are all good and you should write more of them and don't let anyone make fun or say you can't write them... Love, Jess