Eyes Sparkle Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Eyes Sparkle



Now the vacation is on
The children are at home
The house is full of noise
We rejoice presence at no choice

They have got some days respite
Brothers and sisters fight
For one single article
Adding more shouts and trouble

It is good to watch
And try to catch
Their demands in advance
I feel they must enjoy at once

They take no rest
And play with no fear of tests
The books are arranged in shelf
As it is not needed care by self

My eyes sparkle
As I see their smile
What a nice way to play and enjoy!
I avoid giving any chance to annoy

Stress free life has some meaning
We should always be leaning
On positive impact of some drive
That shall fill energy for us to survive

Sunday, November 9, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2014

Now the vacation is on The children are at home

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2014

very on it randle null2 minutes ago I like the last paragraph

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2014

I love it! Monterio Hill33 minutes ago Very superb writing my friend. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2014

Good Harish Bhardwaj33 minutes ago Ovel all its a good poem for the kid and the grown up too. This poem gives the real picture about the childrens during their vacations. loved reading it Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2014

there is a question, what sparkles now, the eyes? didn't flow right along. James Powell28 minutes ago I feel it was over with from the moment it began. we rejoice with what? I feel the author is trying to rhyme words that shouldn't be in the poem in the first place.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 09 November 2014

The very short span of life is not spend it stresses and strains but a little happiness with the family, children, and friends a nice idea. A beautiful and meaningful poem and thought is highlighted.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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