Glamour in a bottle
She begins to apply
Transparent heels
Her body she reveals
DJ announces her name
In vain she enters the stage
Spotlights music starts
Crowd applauding
She begins to move
Her body as one
Intertwined with a pole
For only a moment she fills a hole
The audience doesn't see
A moment of fame
Where everyone knows her name
She releases a lifetime of pain
She floats across the stage
Body moving to the music
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The night slowly ends
And her life begins
Glamour in a bottle
She softly removes
Heels to slippers
Clothes she to hide her bare body
cover the imperfections the lights seem to hide
The glamour comes off
The bruises come back to light
Exotic dancer on stage
No one knows her name
Exotic dancer
A very nice contrast is imbedded in the poem between the moments of fame on the dance floor and the real life. The poem is very well written, good choice of words. Excellent!
Wow! What an exotic and well crafted write my dear Trinidad! I love its smooth flow and catching imagination making me feel like I am actually in one of those special places for exotic dancers! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! I truly enjoyed this amazing write! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I agree with Hans VR. Beautiful poem