You Poem by Trinidad Villafranca

You

Rating: 4.5


You laugh cause my heart is breaking. you dont know
your the cause. how can i belive you when you say
you'll love me forever when i've seen forever turn
into a day so how can i be so sure your here to
stay. How do i know that you wont walk away
again... I can't sit her and take the pain of
forever... so you shouldn't say you'll Love
me forever..what you should say is that you'll
love me while we are together. it would hurt
alot less when when you say good-bye. I hate
having to go through this pain having to feel these
taers, playing this game of pretend. When I know I'll
be the one to end up hurt. i act blind to your flaws.I
pretend your perfect in every way for reasons i
can't explain.But i've had enough of this, this time i'll walk away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fallen Angle 30 May 2008

amazzzzing job thats is a fine poemm keep it you your on the road to sucess cause your poems speak the truth no one wants to say and you found a way toi speak the truth good for you hope to read more

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 May 2008

your expression of love is straight forward and clear. kee[ it up

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