Exchanging Hearts Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Exchanging Hearts

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By the way, if you can't see what I see
I know you have blue eyes and I have black,
But the human eyes are meant for the vision,
Let us exchange and see what we lack.

Now when we have exchanged our hearts
I see a lovely smile on your charming pink face
How lovingly you are looking at me my friend
I see in your face a friendly, a heavenly grace.

You are a nice friend but love is something else
I don't think we can live long together,
We can share some things as true friends,
But sharing life with each other forever?

We are friends and let us remain good friends,
Marriage may be a risky adventure, think twice,
Think about the blended children in the society
May pay an unbearable and intolerable price.

And when the exchange of hearts was reverted
I am the same and you are the same, only a friend
I am satisfied and so is my heart but my black eyes!
Any how I'm stopping but tears they intend!

Exchanging Hearts
Saturday, October 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 23 October 2017

Love and friendship are two different things....! A good friend needn't make a good partner! A very imaginative write!

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Savita Tyagi 21 October 2017

Seeing the world from somebody else's eyes definitely changes one's out look. In matters of love it can really create some better understanding.

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 October 2017

And when the exchange of hearts was reverted I am the same and you are the same, only a friend I am satisfied and so is my heart but my black eyes! Any how I'm stopping but tears they intend! Beatiful lines, a lovely poem.

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