Everything Is Mine (A Reply To Seeing Eye) Poem by Akhtar Jawad
Everything Is Mine (A Reply To Seeing Eye)
When I am touched by your beauty,
My eyes start kissing your silky hairs,
I dive in the deep ocean of your eyes,
Taste your coral lips that have éclairs.
When your beauty invites me to love,
And when you are spooned in my arms,
From head to feet you are a trapper,
My heart is trapped by your charms.
I live in a prison of the beauty-grills,
Until you come in dreams to set me free
During my dream your portrait I paint,
You are a bird sitting and singing on a tree.
No doubt it's your portrait, it's your beauty
But the brush is mine and the colors are mine
I change you in a moon reflecting the sun,
Dear rose! Delicacy is yours but odors are mine.
Beauty touches the eyes. Wind kisses mind. Beauty invites to love and love grills and drills. Reflection changes a lot. Sun gives light to moon. Wonderful poem this is where idea is brilliantly reflected in the mirror of words...10
A beautiful poem dear sir! Liked the last stanza most! (10)
I dive in the deep ocean of your eyes, Taste your coral lips that have éclairs. Intensely passionate.......!
++++++added on beauty will be the out come of your own creation o what a poetic elevation my eyes will see yours deep with in read me now and then may you also and continue the thread interwoven till poetry world evaluates what you and I or anyone else has written but who will be the master of evaluation not I nor you then who my eyes +++100000000000000
we all get inspired by reading others we all get inspired by meeting others we all get inspired out of our own experience in this world nothing happens unless one has his own eyes his brain We all try and use it of our own so why moan beauty is the possession of all not one you are beautiful as is the moon and the sun will also shine on your poems...read on...
Has any Poet or Poetess written such a beautiful poem (reply) as wonderful as this? Stupendous write You outdid yourself here, Akhtar. The twist at the end of the poem is just wonderful. Brilliantly penned.10+++++and on to my Poem List.
When I am touched by your beauty, My eyes start kissing your silky hairs, romantically starts the poem, thanks for sharing
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This is a very nice and a very enjoyable poem to read.