Even Angels Deserve To Die Poem by Payyton Egerstaffer

Even Angels Deserve To Die

Rating: 5.0


Wings of white,
Face and body just right,
Outgoing and nice;
But inside was all ice.
She lies her way,
through every single day.
Life constantly blurry,
So that others would not worry.
Wings rotting inside;
always wishing she could hide,
but she just smiles and carries on;
lying behind a broken song.
Even angels deserve to die;
but without them would we even try?
She knows people expect her to survive,
but even angels deserve to die....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matthew Harrison 11 August 2009

Payyton, you are truly gifted with creativity. Your imagery is always flawless.

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Even angels, deserve to die For though immortal, they cry And who do they have to share fears Only God can comfort their broken tears. Even angels deserve to live Though they live their lives just to give War, and death is their daily encounter. For men rarely call them unless they suffer. Even angels know great sorrow Some really wish not to see the 'morrow But angels know tomorrow 'may' not be the same Better or worst, smiles or tears, angels stay in game... Hang in there, Angel.

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Fiona Davidson 18 December 2008

Nice words Payyton...I like it...thanks for sharing it

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Awww...Very good I love this one. 10++ From me -Brie

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Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
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