Erratic Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Erratic



They can not grasp
The onslaught of thought!
Erratic.
Dramatic destruction
Shows an ignorance taught!
Peace is not going to be won or bought...
By past actions of power.
This is not the hour,
For displays of that might.
It isolates the aggressor,
And promotes a call for more to fight!
Erratic behavior creates a stagnant insight.
And the stronger one weakens...
Losing all to a mental blight!
Erratic they are
Who believe such stances are right.
Goodbye say the allies,
Without a kiss to wish goodnight!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nalini Hebbar 23 September 2006

Peace is not going to be won or bought...By past actions of power.This is not the hour, For displays of that might...very true words...it not only applies to countries but also to people....peace comes by accepting that people are different from us and that everyone has a right to 'be'...people & countries tend to be erratic according to political and economical gains...unfortunately that too is 'human'...i like your critical thinking...love...nalini

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