Edge Of Victory Poem by Ellias Anderson Jr.

Edge Of Victory

Rating: 3.3


Edge of victory is not near yet
I have to try, the last resort is remain, I bet

For superior goals we need to build small acts
Sometimes for winning the game of idiot people, some poor people should be as small as the rats

These goals are nothing
They don't make us king

We should live pure, like the brave devotes
It's important to take all the humanity's votes!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
in our life we have superior goals to be achieved! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leena Sharma 24 August 2012

You are simply magnificient.. Thank you for providing us with a new style..... :)

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Terry O'leary 19 August 2012

Yes...It's important to take all the humanity's votes... unfortunately usually not done... good poem... Terry

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Hamid Negah 17 August 2012

Ellias, i loved last two sentences we should live pure......., these thoughts are the symbol of victory.

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Betty Bolden 17 August 2012

wonderful words and amazing thoughts

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Unwritten Soul 09 August 2012

Victory will only gain when no one will be oppressed but all equally treated fair, become stronger and expressive, and impressed, we need all victory for all people no less_Soul

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

Ellias Anderson Jr.

Iran, Islamic republic of
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