Earth And Space Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Earth And Space

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No Promised Land gentlemen
We have already turned inhuman
The earth planet is not sufficient
We are probing mars at present

Plot booking is on for moon
The scheme may be launched soon
The mad chase may begin
There is no end seen

Land is made hollow
The gas and oil is allowed
To be pumped out at dangerous level
The doom is likely to fall

The air is polluted with compromise
The human race is suffering from unknown diseases
No counter medicine helps to ward off danger
As it has gained immunity over

Water has become scares
Or it may dry soon rivers
The rivers are flowing in spate
The glaciers are melting with fast rate

We have poverty and misery
Still we want more in our armory
The sky is flooded with useless satellites
It may come down at any time on surface

Where is the safe land?
Why do we follow such trend?
There is no logic behind future goal
We are following disastrous and possible fall

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 January 2014

No Promised Land gentlemen We have already turned inhuman

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 January 2014

Sheila Ann Anderson likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome sheila a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 January 2014

Enjoyable Read Elliot Laughlin3 minutes ago Like the reference to man's look to inhabit Mars and the Moon! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 January 2014

OK Emil Eide3 minutes ago .... Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 January 2014

ts about how this planets withering away. and how humanity is over populated so we look for a new home barryLess than a minute ago Very true and to the point of humanity Comment +1 OK Emil Eide3 minutes ago .... Comment +1

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Gajanan Mishra 29 January 2014

we are following disastrous and possible fail, a true poet like you, sir can only dare to caution human race. I like it.Please read my new poems.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 January 2014

Only the strong survive; the wak will perish in the dust of it's original super nova! Richard StephanLess than a minute ago There is nothing we can do to alter the course, stars die and if we depend on a star, we shall be at it's mercy in perpetuity! Great poem Hasmukh Mehta.....I get it! ; -) Ric

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 January 2014

amazing Neela Glover1 minute ago you will be famous someday Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 January 2014

very very good malenky malenky2 minutes ago i love it keep it up more and more and more please Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 January 2014

i love it Victoria Shearer3 minutes ago i loved it it had a good central message within it

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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